New poem?! - Tell me what you think.?

Excellent I would say. It sounds like you opened yourself up to the idea of love and it either scared someone away because they didn't know what to do or you didn't get the response you expected. Whatever the case you have thought about it and you wrote it down. You are to be commended for that. By the way loves never dies easy. In fact it never goes away. The names are just changed to protect the innocent. Walk away in your head if you have to but leave your heart open. It ain't over til its over.